Untitled Poem- please comment title ideas

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Wishing to see you in my arms,
Looking for you up in the stars,
Wanting to hold you close to me,
But melting into misery,
When finding those dreams cannot come true,
That I will never be close to you,
When realizing these facts are relevant,
Thinking I've lost you, who's heaven sent,
These are the things that I've come to hate,
Wish we could reconciliate.

10/25/2007
DimondDaydreamer
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Before I get a million comments telling me that I have made a spelling error in my poem, I want to have you note that I have a policy that I will never edit or fix my poems after they are written. This is a policy of mine so please bear with me on that. I will post them anyway, just know i am probably aware of the error.